I'm working with some words right now that I posted earlyer. Trying to get a feel for what I'm trying to say and I'm struggling with past future and present tense but that's all small details because I can change that once I have a whole song written out that I'm happy with. The tune is in my head but the guitar is in the shop which will help me focus on the lyrical aspect.
"Did you say you heard me?
Because I was thinking that
You haven't put you heart into it
and that your crazy that you think you love me
when you keep turning your back to me
Did I say you hurt me?
Cause I was thinking that
that the way you treat me
living in my back seat
telling me how to live my life was enough
Oh just forget it
This isn't what I thought it was going to be
I wasn't expecting for it to be this way
It's as if this perfect dream
It wasn't meant to be
It wasnt meant for me
Did I make it clear
when I said you were breaking my heart?
You seemed to take pleasure in changing the scene
I can't remember the last time you meant it
when you said you loved me
Yet clearly you still say
That it's ok
I'm not breaking your heart
Just listen to me
I wish somebody would've told me
That it's not ok
Did you ever see it my way?"
It's in different parts. It's not a flowing motion of words but a bunch of ideas rather thrown onto the same document so I can reflect on different feels until I come up with a good nice lyrical flow. I'm excited about it.
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